This story make me happy because of its great message about where we are, where we are going and what it takes to get there.
http://docs.google.com/View?id=dfnxxk2n_0gv23ggcx
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Saturday, August 22, 2009
The Christopher Arms
Posted by David S. Larsen at 1:40 PM
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Ha ha, I've always wanted to read your stuff Bro. Larsen. I think it's bloody brilliant. Gotta love a story with some morals! And as far as editing goes, I caught one little error, when Gena talks about the kids driving "to" fast. You know, grammar and all that, change to "too". Yeah, you went to high school ;). So yeah, there's me helping with editing. I might post some of my stuff soon on mine, so yeah, feel free to let loose on me too ;). Good stuff!
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