A story about dating with children and how hard it can be for the parent. At least that is the idea that inspired it. It turns into another story as well.
If you have read this before, give it another try, I think after editting a full 20% of it away it reads clearer and quicker.
http://docs.google.com/View?id=dfnxxk2n_3dmddt3fn
Saturday, August 22, 2009
Geno's Needs
Posted by David S. Larsen at 8:42 AM
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I love the changes, you made. Some of the dialog after he came back from his date with Megan was a little confusing between Ronnie and Eric. But when I reread and slowed down I put it together. Love the story, don't want it to be a short story though.
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